Pitch Wars! Overview

Hello my sweet readers!

I have exciting news…  Are ya ready?  On the edge of your seat??  GET READY…

We’re extremely excited to announce an upcoming event where  agented authors, industry interns, and editors team up with aspiring writers to shine up their manuscripts and pitches to present to some awesome agents.

Here’s the deets…
Pitch Wars!

  • The teams will consist of 1 agented author or industry intern or editor (coaches) and 1 aspiring author.
  • November 26: The coaches (listed on the linky below) will post on their blogs what genre/category they want to coach. They’ll be very specific genres. Aspiring writers will hop around and decide which coaches best fit their manuscripts.
  • December 5: Aspiring writers will submit 3 “applications” to their top choices for coaches to the contest email (brendadrakecontests@gmail.com) during the allotted times (8AM to 8PM EST). That means, participants will send three separate emails to the contest email addressing each with one of their three top choices for coach.
  • December 5 through December 10: Coaches will read the applications and pick teammates.The coaches don’t have to pick from their applications. If a coach passes on an application, it is then up for grabs and another coach, if they haven’t connected to their applicants, can snatch it after notifying the applicant and if the applicant chooses the coach.
  • December 12: Teams will be announced. On the announcement post there will be instructions on how the winners must send their work.
  • December 12 through January 16: Each coach will read their teammate’s manuscript and give general notes on any issues they find. The coach will help their teammate get his or her pitches ready for the agent round.
  • Note: The material for the agent round will be a 3 sentence pitch and the first 250 words of your manuscript. Coaches will read manuscripts and query letters only once and give notes. It is up to the writer to use the notes from their coaches to get the manuscript and query letter in as best shape as they can to send to requesting agents. The coaches will critique the three sentence pitch and first 250 words. The coaches will read them as many times as they deem necessary. In no way will writers expect the coaches to read the manuscript and query letter more than once or the pitches more than twice.
  • January 20: Coaches will submit shined pitches to the contest email.
  • January 23 and 24: Agents will read and make requests on the pitches they like (it is likely that not all participants will get requests).
  • January 25: We’ll announce the team with the most requests and who will take home the winning prizes (an amazon gift card for each).
  • This is open to finished manuscripts only.
  • You may only enter one manuscript.
  • Only the genres requested by each coach will be considered for the contest.


Subject line: Pitch Wars Application: Coach Name you want to apply for: Title
(Example: Pitch Wars Application: Brenda Drake: GONE WITH THE WIND)

Name: Your Name

Genre: The genre of your manuscript

Word Count: The word count of your manuscript

Query letter here  (embedded in email). Single spaced. No indentions. A space between each paragraph.

First five pages of the manuscript here (embedded in email). Single spaced. No indentions. A space between each paragraph.

REMINDER: You can send an application for up to 3 coaches.

That’s it for now, kids!  Below you will find a list of the BRILLIANT mentors you have to choose from!

I am crazy excited to be a part of this and I can’t wait to see all the amazing entries!

Until next time,

Peace, Love and Pitch Wars!!!

Our mentors …


  1. Oh boy oh boy oh boy! I can’t wait to learn which coaches are requesting which genres. It’s going to be fun just hopping through all y’alls entertaining blogs! *cancels all plans for November 26*

  2. Can’t wait. Thank you for putting this together!

  3. I see your gifs and I raise you a monkey.

  4. Challenge: Finish this MS in….two weeks. As well as keep on track with my NaNo.


  5. Gulp. Guess I’ll be reworking my Row80 goals. Coaching challenge here I come!

  6. Oh no! Is it really too late to be a coach? *hopeful grin*

  7. Brian W. Taylor |

    What could be better than such an epic contest? An epic contest with gifs. Let the stalking begin! Seriously, a huge thank you to all the mentors and organizers. Thank you seems like an inadequate way to express my gratitude. Hi-fives instead?

  8. This is really, really cool. I applaud you and all other blog/Twitter folks who provide these amazing opportunities for aspiring writers. Great learning and networking experiences.

    Even though my story’s premise isn’t hot in the market right now, I’m considering entering. What’s the harm, right? I don’t expect agent requests, but if I managed to get a “coach,” maybe I could get some helpful feedback!

    Whether I enter or not, I’ll be keeping an eye on the contest for sure!

  9. What an awesome idea! I’m already lurking around the MG Mentors’ blogs…

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